These are quite good - I particularly like the first one, but do you need to repeat 2011 each time - same goes for September. Think about how you can communicate the year and/or month without being repetitive.
These are quite good - I particularly like the first one, but do you need to repeat 2011 each time - same goes for September. Think about how you can communicate the year and/or month without being repetitive.
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