This is a good start, but you've cropped away the whole page. How this sits on the page is integral to how innocent it appears. It may be girly, but it can still shout when it's that close-up. Try to ALWAYS consider the page when designing. It's as much a part of the design as the type. That's why you always see me draw the page before I draw anything else when sketching ideas/examples.
Where's the second half? A dull story sexed up?
ReplyDeleteThis is a good start, but you've cropped away the whole page. How this sits on the page is integral to how innocent it appears. It may be girly, but it can still shout when it's that close-up. Try to ALWAYS consider the page when designing. It's as much a part of the design as the type. That's why you always see me draw the page before I draw anything else when sketching ideas/examples.